Freedom
"Every loss is unprecedented. You can't ever know someone else's hurt, not really — just like touching someone else's body isn't the same as having someone else's body." -John Green, Turtles All the Way Down
Death is an escape...it is the ultimate freedom of the soul, from the body. It brings both liberation and pain. The soul of the dead flies away, locking those left behind, in the cage of despair and sorrow. Losing a loved one is certainly heartbreaking. The scars of this loss do not heal easily. They leave their marks on the heart. At times, after one loses their beloved, their life seems meaningless to them. They find it hard to find the same warmth, love and affection. But, death sets them free, those who are suffering. It liberates them from the burdens of life. It makes the soul happier, giving them an open sky to wander...
Horizon is just an imaginary line,
In the other word I hope you're fine.
In this moment Is the epiphany of tonight
To find you, with myself as I fight .
Somewhere you're rambling in my mind
After you, my existence as I find.
But you were a soul that deserved to be free
With that, my words turn into poetry .
Your last words echo in my ears
"In parallel universe, we'll meet " melts me into tears.
They say "Forever is a lie "
Who knew so soon you'll die!
-Vedanshi
Death is an escape...it is the ultimate freedom of the soul, from the body. It brings both liberation and pain. The soul of the dead flies away, locking those left behind, in the cage of despair and sorrow. Losing a loved one is certainly heartbreaking. The scars of this loss do not heal easily. They leave their marks on the heart. At times, after one loses their beloved, their life seems meaningless to them. They find it hard to find the same warmth, love and affection. But, death sets them free, those who are suffering. It liberates them from the burdens of life. It makes the soul happier, giving them an open sky to wander...
Freedom
Horizon is just an imaginary line,
In the other word I hope you're fine.
In this moment Is the epiphany of tonight
To find you, with myself as I fight .
Somewhere you're rambling in my mind
After you, my existence as I find.
But you were a soul that deserved to be free
With that, my words turn into poetry .
Your last words echo in my ears
"In parallel universe, we'll meet " melts me into tears.
They say "Forever is a lie "
Who knew so soon you'll die!
-Vedanshi
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DeleteOkay, wow! Again, I truly felt this one. The lose of any loved one hits you deep down the heart... but ultimately its their own freedom. No one can understand the pain one feels after losing their loved one.... but nothing else can replace the freedom of that person's soul.... Vedanshi this is truly a wonderful oneππ―
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DeleteSars sabd rachna che bahu kaye jay che
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Deletewow! What an amazing work! I felt it to the core. π― Vedanshi, beautifully penned. The pain that comes after losing your loved one is the worst pain one could ever have...it could not be described in words. Keep it up girl! ❤️
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DeleteWell explained about the sorrow or say pain of losing someone whom u loved truly. Vedanshi!keep it up ...this words just got bombed up into my heart❤
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